What do you think of my anime character?

I think it is a little far fetched like my Rp character Enelle she is a nymph but in that "world" there is a school kids go to for alchemy and magic teachers she is very powerful (the last lightning user) but she does not know..... maybe you should make him get his powers one at a time and with each ability gained there is some kind of....... issue that makes an interesting story... (he does sound like a cool character)